Some people think that it is better to live in countryside to have a healthy lifestyle, while others claims that city has more health benefits. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often said that health is wealth because a healthy man can live a happy life. However, a section of society deems that villages are more beneficial to offering a healthier lifestyle to humans the reason is that the atmosphere of countryside is less polluted and full with greenery since others support urban areas for providing more health related pros like big hospitals, new methods of treatments and big doctors. This easy will shed light on both views along with my notion.
One school of thought believe that villages are helpful for giving more healthy benefits to masses and first is that the surrounding of countryside are less polluted than cities because there are not any traffic congestion of vehicles on roads who burn fuels. In addition to this, a least amount of industries and factories are set up here which releases majority of streams and detrimental water which causes of perilous ailments. Moreover, a vast number of farmers who living in countryside are doing husbandry so that is why villages are those places which are full with greenery. For example, a survey of 2017 shows that 10 out of 9 tress are every year planted by farmers and villager people on fields, between villages areas and sides of roads.
The another school of thought claims that metropolitan areas has offer huge number of health facilities to humans because a vast amount of health centres and big hospitals are available in citified areas which give a variety of treatments techniques to patients for recover quickly. In other words, a majority of big doctors are staying in urban areas who are useful to provide treatments related cancer and other perilous disease. Even though, a big machines who are expanding for find the signs of ailments in patient’s’ bodies are present in cities. Apart from this, a large chemist shops are in cities which give any types of medicine any time. For instance, PGI in Chandigarh are one of the biggest hospital in whole Punjab and Haryana providing a treatments for harmful disease like cancer, AIDS and etcetera.
In my prospective, countryside and cities are playing crucial role in human’s life to offer them healthier lifestyle. Furthermore, villages are giving healthy living by healthy environment and lots of greenery whereas urban areas provide advance treatments facilities to patients to improve faster.
In conclusion, although, citified areas are offer majority of latest modern methods of treatments but countryside given peaceful,healthy and fully green atmosphere to people to live healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ds who burn fuels. In addition to this, a least amount of industries and factorie...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'tress' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'tresses'.
Suggestion: tresses
...a survey of 2017 shows that 10 out of 9 tress are every year planted by farmers and v...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'offered'.
Suggestion: offered
...ught claims that metropolitan areas has offer huge number of health facilities to hum...
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Line 5, column 762, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a treatment' or simply 'treatments'?
Suggestion: a treatment; treatments
...l in whole Punjab and Haryana providing a treatments for harmful disease like cancer, AIDS a...
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Line 9, column 60, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...ough, citified areas are offer majority of latest modern methods of treatments but countr...
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Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , healthy
...reatments but countryside given peaceful,healthy and fully green atmosphere to people to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, apart from, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15827338129 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78097648354 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4364549105 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.4 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186797239401 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637020949874 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040075675164 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114833855433 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300231605423 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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