You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
Hi Rajiv,
Hope this letter finds you well.
As you're staying in abroad and has a keen interest to grab news about my country, I thought to write down a letter regarding hype news, which is being the tea time discussion, currently.
This news story is about the demonetization, declared by our Prime Minister, which means the new banknotes will supersede the old notes. Especially which are more than 500 bucks and notes below 100 rupees can be ignored. Moreover, people need to exchange their old notes in a government bank facility.
Though some people don't like the idea, the majority believe that it will bring back the black money to India and prosperity as well. People who didn't pay taxes, for example, and kept the money as hard cash, need to pay tax whilst depositing the money in the bank.
On top of that, it's also affected me, as I am a citizen of India. I have to deposit all the old notes into a bank so as to get back new notes in return. But I am happy for the great movement.
Hope this news would steer your anxiety. Do write me back, if you need a brief elaboration.
Waiting for your response.
Your Friend,
Manas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as to, for example, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65865384615 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34975684881 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663461538462 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5957145215 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2142857143 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22668394244 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831603662988 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976786206038 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103693959032 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719271768362 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.