The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Given is a map of an island comparing it before and after some tourist facilities were constructed.
As shown in the figure, before the construction of tourist facilities, there had been only two areas of coconut trees in the west and the east of the island. The island remained intact.
With regard to the structure of the island after tourist facilities were built, the island showed a enormous change. In the north of the island is a restaurant, linked to the pie in the sea by a vehicle track. There is also a reception surrounded in the path on the way from restaurant to the pier. Surrounding the coconut tree in the north of the island is a zone of accommodation. Beyond this, meanwhile, to the east of the reception, is an even larger residential zone with many accommodation.
It is also interesting to note that while the beach had no use at all before the construction of tourist facilities, it is then taken advantage of for swimming. The footpath surrounding the residential zone to the north of the reception terminates at the beach. There is also a footpath linked all the accommodations in the east of the island.
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