Doctors in many countries are saying that people are not getting enough physical exercise. What are the causes of this and how it can be addressed?
In modern society, health specialists in different parts of the world say that people are not doing enough physical activities because they do not have a lot of time. Actually, it can be avoided, if physical performance will be the compulsory part in the job place or in the learning institution.
One of the main reasons why people not doing too much exercise because they do not have a lot of time. We are more concentrated on our studies or spending too much time in the workplace. It is because of advantages which can be a reason for a better career or a good mark. For instance, a recent study found that people after their work are very tired and in order to rest, they prefer to have some entertainment activities, rather do physical exercise.
A lack of physical activity leads to a range of serious problems, so it is important that this issue is solved. One possible solution is when the school or the job management team will launch a mandatory physical education program. This program should be short, so it will not affect the educational or work process. For example, according to the research, spending at least 15 minutes for physical activity will decrease the chance of heart attack.
In Conclusion, we do not do a lot of physical exercises and the reason for that is our busy lifestyle such as a school or office. If our main activity will be accompanied by physical study, we can avoid such a problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6837944664 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70998703794 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533596837945 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6276926254 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179618637159 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705480973966 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432447830645 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116359772657 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421975230849 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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