The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 to 2011.
The information that is provided by the chart is about household percentage in accommodation of owned and rented in two cities in 1918 until 2011. Overall, the are different change of the both between household in owned accommodation and household in rented accommodation where the owned experience developing in every years whereas in rented was decrease.
Base on the graft, the owner of accommodation in 1918 just around a fifth, then in the middle year was increase in a half the number similar with household in rented on 1971, and in 2001 was growing dramatically until less than three-quarters, as well as experienced reducing in 2011 was above 60 %.
It was seen from the chart that the renter of the accommodation went down extremely where in 1918 reach more than 75% then experienced a fall in every years such as in 2001 was falling until less than a third. Finally, increased in 2011 slightly two-fifth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...two cities in 1918 until 2011. Overall, the are different change of the both between ho...
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Suggestion:
...ehold in rented on 1971, and in 2001 was growing dramatically until less than thr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then, third, well, whereas, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94838709677 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96009510837 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.8737145952 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.4 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.23603664747 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324270626027 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199497225912 0.103423049105 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143019214297 0.0843802449381 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231854166609 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170546542026 0.0819641961636 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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