do you agree or disagree with the statements:people often buy products not because they really need them but because other people have them.
In recent decades,people’s living condition has improved a lot .everyone can purchase the things they want for different reasons.from my perspective , i think the motivation of purchasing either comes form the need of them or the envy of other people already have possessed them and the former takes a bigger accounts .
For instance ,in my dorm, my roommates always buy the products they really needs .when they need to wash their clothes they would buy a laundry liquid.and they would buy the books and pens when they are going to make notes for the classes.the all thing they bought is because they really need them and the products are necessary ,without it ,you can not do the daily stuffs.and this kind of reason of buying things take the most part of one’s living. However things may become different in sometimes,one of my roommates brought an iPad,and it is really useful,he use it to watch some videos and play some games.To be honestly,it’s functions is just sounds like a phone,so there is no need for everyone buy such a thing.it is because that we can watch video and play games without it.what’s is surprising is that after few days another one of my roommates buy a iPad either.when i come to ask the reasons why he brought it.he just said “it looks pretty good”.no other special reasons.this kind of phenomenon is not frequent in my college life,but it still sometimes happen.i think the reason of this reason for purchasing is due to the their curiosity of the products and envy of other people already have possessed them.But there is a prerequisite requirements,the thing must be affordable,otherwise they wouldn’t buy it.
So ,to sum up，the willing of shopping either comes from the need of them or the envy of other people already have possessed them.but as a sensible people ,most of them would buy the products they really needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, for instance, i think, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97160883281 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07229543236 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542586750789 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 20.1344086022 392% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 259.442069642 48.9658058833 530% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 394.0 100.406767564 392% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.25 20.6045352989 385% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.75 5.45110844103 454% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344010854963 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.254188505097 0.076458572812 332% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905748005009 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283592991306 0.150856017488 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717788760546 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.6 11.7677419355 354% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.25 58.1214874552 -0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.9 10.1575268817 324% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.73 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.01818996416 131% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.002688172 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.6 10.0537634409 334% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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