Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is often argued that music plays a key role in cutting the long distance not only among cultures, but also generations. Also, there are different ways to overcome the diversity which is evident in different civilizations, but the potential role of music should be considered more.
First and foremost, there is a considerable variety of music, from American rock-and-roll to Iranian traditional music. There are a lot of people who love a piece of music at the same time in different countries and ages. For example, Korean pop is one of the popular kinds of music nowadays. So, many people from all over the world with different ages gather in the related groups in social media networking websites to support their favorite singer and also to share their ideas. In this way, the age gap can be bridged by music and people can get friendly even if they live in different continents.
Furthermore, there are some pieces of information about a country’s culture in its traditional music. For instance, we can find out how the life was in the past from the music which is handed down to us. In addition, people from diverse ages gather in many festivals in which all kinds of music are played so the teenagers can understand their own society’s culture which is represented in songs.
In conclusion, although there are various ways of bringing people together regardless their nationality and ages, but art and music have the chief effect due to the fans and popularity that they have.
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89411764706 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76456403474 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1702570364 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.454545455 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250768045084 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950926608829 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505867628559 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143196534187 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528780875219 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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