Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specifie reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most of the people today own their cars. It is obvious that the ride is more convenient and usable transportation than any other vehicle. I disagree that the use of the machines would cut in twenty years. The amount of the motor industry may grow because of the developing technology. Moreover, as global warming destroy the earth, the automobile companies would make echo-vehicle, so there would be more various auto in the vehicle market. Therefore, I do not assent the claim that the number of the cars would be fewer in the future.
As the Fourth Industrial Revolution occurred, the car business made a great change. In the past, forming the rides, they concentrated on the hardware and external shape of the vehicles. However, the commerce began to create an AI-transportation since they advanced the AI-high-tech People do not have to drive the machine and all they have to do is ordering to the robotics. Because the expert-system-auto users expand, the motor management would advance. There will be more people who spend the money to car. Hence, I would not support the idea that the men who buy the automobiles will decrease.
These days, almost all people can admit that the global warming is one of the most serious problems in this earth. A lot of folks realized that they have to protect and care about the planet. The transport commerce may also be aware of this fact, and they will reinforce the echo-automobile. This ride is able to strain an emission of carbon dioxide rate. The people will gradually buy the motorcar to protect the world from the global warming. Also, since the industries are trying to develop these special autos, there will be various kinds of the vehicle in the market. Consequently, I believe that the users of the cars may increase.
Of course, the car management attempt a lot of tests for new mechanics, so the price of the vehicle might rise for short. However, once these autos, which have an AI system and echo-function—diminishing of the emission of the carbon dioxide—the mass of the novel automobiles would seem, then the price of the machine will go down again. furthermore, even if the price is expensive, it may be a way to protect the earth, and the people would buy the cars.
To sum up, the size of the novel automobile business would enlarge since the level of high-technology may enhance. In addition, there will be more diverse motorcars than before because a lot of companies are trying to build echo-transportations. For these reasons, I disagree with the statement that in several years, the amount of the car will decline.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...car business made a great change. In the past, forming the rides, they concentrat...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...rice of the machine will go down again. furthermore, even if the price is expensive, it may...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, in addition, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 9.8082437276 245% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2172.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90293453725 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00675336731 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474040632054 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5222266579 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.88 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.72 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162663885118 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489252639506 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512067542677 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982057173762 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411249150415 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.