Shopping has become a new favourite pastime for younger generation. Why is this the case? Should we encourage them to develop other hobbies too?
It is an undeniable fact that shopping is one of the favourite alternatives for passing time not only for teenagers but also for adults. Looking at the current trend, young generations chooses shopping over other productive activities. In this essay I shall discuss why shopping is gaining popularity and what are its pros and cons.
Firstly, shopping is considered one of the great options for curbing stress. Today, students are burden with academic studies and projects due to competition and this creates stress and anxiety in them. Similarly, young working professionals who are part of corporate world also undergo stress due to work and in order to achieve a work life balance. As per few psychologist, people who indulge in shopping on regular basis are found to be much happier with relatively low stress levels. Also, shopping with family or friends, makes the relationship stronger and creates memories which can be cherished for lifelong. Furthermore, due to globalization, today we have quite a few famous international brands available in shopping malls. In order to attract more customers and accelerate their sales, these international brands tend to come with lucrative offers which attracts the young working professionals who likes to be trendy. As per recent survey, young generations themselves more than once in a month, as they like to flaunt their lifestyle and uplift their status in front of their rich friends or family.
Conversely, there are flip side to this as well. Since young generations are more incline towards shopping, they do not occupy themselves in other productive activities or hobbies which in turn help in building up their personality. Few psychologist claims that people who do pick up an activity or hobby tend to become lazy and less creative. Additionally, young generations end up spending their hard money in shopping which in turn could have been saved for their bright future. In my opinion should encourage the young people to develop hobbies as it is a great way to learn new things and also definitely a cheaper way to eliminate stress from life.
To recapitulate, we should encourage young people to develop new hobbies as this will help them to realise their strengths and weakness. Also, educate them that shopping shouldn’t be the favourite pastime but should be considered as a necessity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to shop'.
Suggestion: to shop
...urrent trend, young generations chooses shopping over other productive activities. In th...
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Line 13, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut should be considered as a necessity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, similarly, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19843342037 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85831745304 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55091383812 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0087160238 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.611111111 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254216634367 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812179205494 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069544846695 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190575082005 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970906098687 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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