The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and in different parts of the world.
The bar graph elucidates the percentage of people living in five sub-continents such as Africa, Asia, Europe, Latin America, and North America, and the whole world.
Overall, it is clear that the proportion of people is growing and is expected to increase in the long run. While the highest percentage of people resides in North America, the lowest portion of people dwells in Africa.
Now, turning into the details, there was a gradual increase in the rate of population in Africa which was 15% in 1950, 37% in 2007, and is expected to soar in 51% in 2030. In Asia, the percentage of the population was approximately the same as Africa from 1950 to 2007 and experience an increase in 2030 by 3% compared to the rate of population in 2007. In the case of most populated continents, such as Europe, in 1950, the percentage of people which accounts for 51%, was considerably lower than the portion of people which makes up 72% in 2007 and will be slightly climbed by 6% in 2030. Regarding the population in Latin America, the proportion of the population will be doubled from 1950 to 2030 by 42% to 84%. In contrast, the slow increase in the population saw in North America in 1950 at 64%, 79% in 2007 and expecting 87% in 2050. The world population escalated from 29% in 1950 to 49% in 2007 , but in 2050, the world will become overpopulated by 60%.
- The graph below shows the rate of attendance for primary and secondary schools for boys and girls across the world 66
- Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- The line graph shows the arrivals of visitors from different parts of the world . 67
- The graph shows the number of trips which was done by children in one country in 1990 and in 2010 travel to and from by using various types of transports. 67
- The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and in different parts of the world. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 904, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...scalated from 29% in 1950 to 49% in 2007 , but in 2050, the world will become over...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, well, while, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5867768595 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67152050253 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471074380165 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3154230206 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8888888889 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146856668557 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716610751721 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627856685103 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108477630864 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673568981037 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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