the bar chart below shows the number of students who chose university certain subjects in 2005. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the numbers of students who chose to study different university subjects in 2005. The numbers for each subject are divided into male and female students and show some general differences between men's and women's choice of subjects.
Science and Mathematics were the most popular choices for male students in 2005, but non-science subjects were more popular with female students. the most popular subjects for female students were less technical subjects such as Social Sciences, Languages, Literature, and Humanities. Social Sciences was by far the most popular subjects for women. However, very few female students chose to study Languages, and about more than two thousand men chose The Arts. However, just as many men as women chose to study Humanities.
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- the bar chart below shows the number of students who chose university certain subjects in 2005. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The bar chart below shows the number of student who chose certain university subjects in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- the bar chart below shows the number of students who chose university certain subjects in 2005. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...were more popular with female students. the most popular subjects for female studen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 655.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 123.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32520325203 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50506790181 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1162478498 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5714285714 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212404355671 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126965663113 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138625132976 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212941880212 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104922731179 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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