The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph illustrates the rate of females who are unemployed, measured in percentage, in 4 different contries of the UK namely in two years: 2013 and 2014.

Overall, the most significant rate of female unemployers were in england in 2013 while the lowest rate in wales. In addition in last year the highest percentage was in scotlant whereas low percentage recorded in northern Ireland.

In 2013, the percentage of the women unemployment was more in england with 6.8 percentage as opposed to wales at 5.4%. The number of job less females in scotland were with 6.1%, which is less than unemployers in 2014 by 0.5%. In addition 5.6% of unemployers were in Northern Ireland.

In 2014, The largest number of female job less holders were in scotland at 6.7% while Northern ireland contributed the small percentage. It was 4.6%. The percentage of wales and scotland was rocorded as 5.0% and 6.7% respectively

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...2013 while the lowest rate in wales. In addition in last year the highest percentage was...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun females is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...sed to wales at 5.4%. The number of job less females in scotland were with 6.1%, whi...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ss than unemployers in 2014 by 0.5%. In addition 5.6% of unemployers were in Northern Ir...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun holders is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... 2014, The largest number of female job less holders were in scotland at 6.7% while ...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...It was 4.6%. The percentage of wales and scotland was rocorded as 5.0% and 6.7% r...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01307189542 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82000203292 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535947712418 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5374292018 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2222222222 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15018552113 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645728378774 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590554000466 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103706020745 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384439543737 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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