Do you agree that modern technology has given us more leisure time than before?
In the history of mankind, probably there is no century bombarded with technology rather than 20th century. Assessing the correlation between technological development and leisure time is now a controversial issue. As far as I deem, leisure times expanded hence, technology advanced and it is prevalent to spend spare time with technological entertainments.
The advent of technology, admittedly has affected on people’s compulsory works and day life. As computer use migrated from work to home environment it was paralleled by new science advances practically and information access through the internet. Being surrounded with digital world, the businesses and gaming even has been changed dramatically. For instance, Amazon as the leader of the retail online sales, has utilized robots in most of physical efforts instead of staffs. Over against its employees do technical and analytical tasks. In the other words that get them the opportunity to have more time to entertain.
From another angle socializing which is another aspect of leisure time, has been transformed intensively by modern technology. In past, the only method for having communication was face to face to extent that, if anyone immigrated nobody even have been connected to. By expansion of Internet, socializing with everyone at any second is not anymore a dream. One survey in developed countries, shows that approximately 70% of people spend their leisure time on Internet by intercommunicate their friends.
To put in a nutshell, modern life have consequently transformed by Internets and artificial intelligence and these technology not only facilitate our lives but also permit us to have more and optimized spare time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e with technological entertainments. The advent of technology, admittedly has...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...rtunity to have more time to entertain. From another angle socializing which is ...
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Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...ormed intensively by modern technology. In past, the only method for having communicati...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'face to'.
Suggestion: face to
...nly method for having communication was face to face to extent that, if anyone immigrated nobod...
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... that, if anyone immigrated nobody even have been connected to. By expansion of Inte...
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Line 11, column 110, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...ternets and artificial intelligence and these technology not only facilitate our lives but also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, second, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5534351145 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17999407754 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667938931298 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5896299572 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235708987042 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070363244036 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070939041435 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139333839865 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712661523961 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.