Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’ culture and character from their choice of clothes
Do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that clothes tell plenty of things about the nature and cultural background of a person. I disagree with the notion as clothes may sometimes help to identify not more than basic identity background of a person, however, most cases nowadays they are influenced by western culture and celebrities.
There are few cases in which clothes might help to recognize the background of a person. Some people still follow the traditional dress of their culture. In case of these people, we can identify from their clothes that, they belong to certain community or culture. For example, by seeing a woman in a saree or an Indian ladies suit, we can easily identify that the woman belongs to Indian culture. In my opinion, only these cases, we can identify something about cultural background, nevertheless, it is difficult to recognize more characteristics of the person from their clothes.
On the other side, there is a huge impact of western culture on our clothes, which is leading similar type of clothes all around the globe. People are following western attires and not preferring to wear their cultural clothes. Due to this, it has become impossible to identify the background or character of a person. For instance, most people now wear jeans and T-shirts at home and formals at office, due to this, it is not possible to tell about any feature of them.
Moreover, people are now following their favourite celebrities in the terms of clothing. They try to imitate the attire of their preferred actors or sport stars. This influence of celebrities on clothing has made it difficult for anyone to identify the character or background of a person. Considering all this, I believe that clothes nowadays are influenced either by the international style wearing or by the attires of famous personalities, due to which, it is not possible for us to recognize anything about a person.
To conclude, although in case of some people who follow their traditional attire, we may identify their social background, most cases people follow western style of wearing, which is making it impossible for us to understand anything about them. It is predicated that this influence of celebrities and foreign culture is continue to rise further and will eliminate completely the regional style of clothing.
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Suggestion: continued
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07349081365 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7913234664 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448818897638 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5685700341 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.705882353 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4117647059 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237726240427 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884633690932 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516468510771 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147548338259 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195051818495 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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