Movies are now the integral part of humans life. Whenever the person get
some he/she prefers to watch movie rather than spending time in other
activities. There are wide range of movies are availble. Some people
prefer to watch serious movies while some people prefer to watch
entertaing movie. I will prefer to watch entertaining movies for the
following reasons.
Todays lifestyle is already stressful so entertaining movies are helpful
to release that stress to some extent. After the stressful day at work
light comedy will cheer up. For example, while preparing for the exam
most the time I was studying. After studied for 2 hours I took a break
for 1 hr to refresh myself and prepare myself to study again. During this
break time I used to watched the comdey movies like Shrek and Descicable
me. That movies were so comedy that I used to laugh at every scene and
forgot about the stress of study. After watching movie for a while I
again back to study with more focus and attention. And one advantage of
watching comedy movie is that I don't need to remember all story I can
watch any scene from the comedy movie and enjoy it. Light comedy is what
everyone needs to release the stress and entertaing movies are source of
light comedy.
Serious movies make impact on human life. Some scences from the serious
movies are so offensive and inaapropriate or horrifying that human can
not forgot it and it creates negativity in individuals. For example, when
I was child, no one was at home and I was just stwitchinng between the
channels. While doing so, I saw that Annabele movie was being telecast on
television. Earlier I heard about that movie but never had the chance to
watch it so I started watching the movie. While watching the movie I
eraaly got scared. After that many times when I got woke up in the night
I had the feeling that there is someone sitting over my wardrobe and
watching me. Till date I haven't overcome that fear. I got reaaly scared
when I was alone at home. Serious movies have some contetwnt which are
difficult to digest for normal people. So, its better to watch entertaing
movies over serious movie.
It's not always true that serious movies create negatibve impact some
movies are so useful to create public awareness among the people and some
movie are knowledgable and educational. But entertaing movies] are fun.
Entertaining movies also are educational and help to educate childern
through ente.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2147.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05176470588 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39655577544 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487058823529 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0245867031 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6785714286 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1785714286 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.32142857143 5.45110844103 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 34.0 4.53405017921 750% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 64.0 5.5376344086 1156% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185840564025 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600599078257 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457124189572 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560357182416 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485324483021 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.