You have spare room in in your flat or an apartment and you want to rent it to a student. write a letter to the director of the accommodation office at the local college. In your letter;-explain where your apartment is-describe the room-what kind of perso

Dear Mr. Crawley,

I am writing to you regarding the vacant room that I have at my apartment, which, I would like to rent out to a fellow student at the college.

The 201 Tony apartment building is situated on the military street just across the large Tesco outlet. As you might know, this is a very convenient location with various restaurants, cafes, a library and a metro station nearby.

The flat is situated on the 17th floor, has a fairly spacious living room with an attached deck, and a furnished kitchen with stainless steel appliances. In total there are two bedrooms, one of them is occupied by me, while the other one I would like to rent out. Also, the apartment building has a well-equipped gymnasium and swimming pool.

Specifically, I would like to rent the unoccupied bedroom to a post-graduate student as they are usually matured to follow the decorum of the apartment building.

I would be thankful to you if you could give my reference to any student who is looking out for a flat on rent. I am reachable on dgdh@gmail.com.

Yours Sincerely,
Henry Thomas

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , h
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80952380952 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85109098429 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624338624339 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7344509096 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245295370647 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792397000291 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599752017624 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116267522426 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593634340049 0.0580467560999 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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