It is a fact that some people only eat a vegetarian diet which means to completely avoid meat or fish because this phenomenon might aid their overall health status as well as the entire globe. This essay illustrates this view, followed by my own notion.
To begin with, it is true that some people consume entirely vegetarian food because promoting their health, despite having a non-vegetarian diet. The vegetarian food contains numerous healthy nutrients such as vitamins, minerals, proteins, and amino acids which are essential for the human body. For instance, most of the nutritionists advise patients to consume fresh vegetables and fruits which help to recover rapidly from illness or disease in hospitals, despite consuming meat or fish products which contain excess fatty substance; hence, it could worsen ill-health. Therefore, vegetarian foods promote the overall health status of the individual.
Moreover, vegetarianism aids not only an individual but also the whole world. To specify, avoid animal slaughtering such as cow, ox, and buffalo for meat consumption, despite lynching animals and having meat, let the animals utilize various purposes such as milk production and harvesting fields which help humans. For example, the Uttar Pradesh state administration, India has forbidden meat consumption two years back; as a result, people in this state promote agriculture and leading their lives healthy. Thus, vegetarianism helps immensely to keep the world safely.
In conclusion, indeed, most of the people entirely rely on vegetarian food consumption because it promotes overall individuals’ health, and also it aids the entire globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70750988142 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89128746223 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624505928854 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7033857389 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.272727273 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2727272727 7.06120827912 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185074437721 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760720546853 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045282747878 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121609753647 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603287076789 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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