There is no doubt that different cultures value certain age group more than others. Some cultures consider older people to be more important whereas other cultures consider young individuals to be of significant importance. This essay will analyze both sides and opine that a balance should be maintained.
To commence with some cultures believe that experience of old people is invaluable and should be leveraged. This is because life is too short to experiment and learn from our own mistakes rather we should learn from our seniors. For instance, elderly people guide the young generation to make right decisions, which in turn helps them to lead a better life. Furthermore, society becomes happier when veterans are taken care off properly. This happens as people do not worry about old age and feel a sense of belonging instead of feeling isolated.For example, studies have depicted that Danish people are happiest as their culture focused on older generation.
However, it should not be forgotten that youth are the future of tomorrow so they play a crucial role in building healthy culture. While old people will die soon, youth will continue to live longer therefore more emphasis should be given to their development.To illustrate, some nations such as Germany, China are having aging population as a major issue so they should focus on youth so that their countries can thrive and survive. Moreover, if young generation is not valued, it will lead to deterioration of culture and values. This will happen for a simple reason that Government will focus on old people and will not provide facilities for young individuals so they will not get a platform to grow and feel burdened.
In conclusion, in my opinion a balance should be maintained by cultures in valuing old and young people so that society can progress as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07523510972 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74835293471 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548589341693 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.73461683 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.9 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173604829355 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074183135355 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615335784733 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115354726429 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334931035857 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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