You are going on holiday next week and you need to ask your friend to watch your dog while you are away.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
-state how long you will be away,
-tell them what needs to be done.
-state how you will compensate them.
Dear Adam,
Hope you are very well and this letter find you fine. I am writing this letter to get help related to my puppy ,whose name is Lucky, during the my abroad trip.
As I have mentioned before, I am going to go to The UK to participate in London Finance Conference with by my employer on 28th of December.
According the conference brochure, I get , it would last about four or five day and during the these time I need to your assistance for my dog. It is an important matter that my puppy were just born one month ago therefore it will need to be feed three times a day by giving a handful dog food and fresh-daily milk.
Please do not worry my friend it will not cause any problem or damage regarding your furnitures at your home. However, Please keep far away it from bath not to be sick.
I know exactly that I will owe you for your helping and I am promising that it will not be unrequited for you.
In case of emergency situations or if you need some help , please let me know via cell phone.
See you soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s letter to get help related to my puppy ,whose name is Lucky, during the my abroa...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...o my puppy ,whose name is Lucky, during the my abroad trip. As I have mentioned bef...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 41, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...According the conference brochure, I get , it would last about four or five day an...
^^
Line 17, column 59, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...t I will owe you for your helping and I am promising that it will not be unrequited for you....
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Line 19, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ency situations or if you need some help , please let me know via cell phone. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31313131313 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29115145724 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5315977194 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336589742346 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129322102292 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850871240872 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1499338206 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861568404227 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.