People nowadays are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons for this? What measures can be taken for this?
Exercises are found to be beneficial to humans and it enhances healthy living. Although adults tend to do less of these, people are increasingly interested in various ways by which exercises can be made attractive other than participating in a sports tournament. In my opinion, rudimentary activities such as signing up for a gym class and individual workouts are more effective.
Global sports tournaments are organized for professionals with expertise with higher objectives than the basic need for exercise. Several sporting competition are staged annually across the world by various countries and governing bodies which concentrate on getting world-class country representatives rather than amateurs. For instance, the World Cup hosted by FIFA every four years, host a final following rigorous round of qualifiers for several matches in two years. These football matches are played by athletes who take the game as a profession which in reverse keeps them physically fit. However, due to the strenuous work involved in keeping up at that level, it becomes extremely difficult for the aged to consider this as an option for getting better health thus the cause for the retirement of sportsmen as they grow older.
Today, numerous businesses are building well equipped standard gym and exercise centers to encourage people especially the old to get fit. Most gyms facilities provide services for general fitness, bodybuilding, and dieting. For example in Nigeria, it is common to see multiple such centers within a small neighborhood. These gyms have professional trainers who offer various services based on individual want and assessment. The assessments are particularly essential for adult because it allows the trainer to have first-hand information before the commencement of the training. Based on a survey by Uppsala University, humans become weaker as they grow old and susceptible to ailments, for this reason, adults are encouraged to spend time in the gym.
In conclusion, although competitions like the Olympic can be an option for exercise for the participants, the requirements such as registration and cost implications make it less alluring to adults.
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- People nowadays are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons for this? What measures can be taken for this? 89
- People nowadays are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons for this? What measures can be taken for this? 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ttractive other than participating in a sports tournament. In my opinion, rudimentary ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53412462908 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06065213774 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623145400593 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8639424631 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255015191519 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772545216117 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528571024437 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147966667398 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193749650375 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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