Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways.
In today’s highly competitive world all we care about are the results. It is often argued that a person’s intellect is directly proportional to his success in the life. In my opinion, it is actually wrong to judge a person intelligence by his current fame, money, etc.
Firstly, intelligence are of different type for instance, some people are keen in field of their interest and, are drawn towards it. While, others might be exceptional in music and dance.Secondly, There are innumerable luminaries who got fame and name after their death and the world did not their art when they were live.For instance, Picasso a world-renowned artist who was not successful in his time but, got famous in early 21 century.
More often than not it is assumed that if a person is famous, or has recently attracted large crowd of audience he is successful and intelligent. For instance, tik-tok is a mobile application where people attract a lot of audience in short span of time by posting video content. This surely does account for their intelligence. Secondly one's success do not tell how imtelligent or dumb a person is
In the end one does not need fame to prove that he is smart and definitely doesn't need success to prove that he is intelligent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88317757009 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92629343915 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626168224299 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1327651104 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.111111111 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157877599471 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570619048435 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362072188939 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803441231597 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432076289481 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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