Large numbers of visitors endanger sensitive archeological sites such as Mach Picchu. In your opinion, is it more important to try to preserve such sites or to allow public access to them?
Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The sustainability and preservation of archeological sites cannot be over-emphasized, what will become of these sites, if we continue to allow large number of tourist? In this essay, I will attempt to give my opinion, with reference to, if it is essential to try to sustain such places or to allow the public have access to them.
Tourism has contributed massively and immensely to the economic development of many countries globally. for instance, foreigners love to visit several African countries like Egypt to see sites such as the Egyptian pyramids, caves and much more.
Because of the sensitive nature of these sites, sustaining their standard and originality should be any government's top priority. Archeological sites, are generally used for research and educational purposes, so if value such places are altered, the results derived from them will be inaccurate. For example, we have several discoveries that had been made about dinosaurs, which would have been impossible if not for the maintenance of such sites.
Restricting the level of public accessibility to these sites and charging reasonable entry fees will also aid in preserving these sites. furthermore, the money derived from the fees, can also be used to cater for its administrative and operating expenses. It could also be used to upgrade certain aspects of such sites.
however, if restrictions on such sites are too rigid, the public may lose interest in visiting them. Also, if fees charged are too high, they may tag visiting such places as luxury.
In conclusion, the authorities must attempt to strike a balance between these two views, as both are mutually dependent. In addition, they should also carry the public along on activities they are planning on archeological sites, as this will give the people a sense of participation and involvement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29152542373 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00472480565 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2044532297 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209880464789 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072961643439 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616644305427 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108464775293 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679085747558 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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