Online shopping has been beneficial in many societies
Bilguudei’s toefl essay (Online shopping has been beneficial in many societies)
Undoubtedly, online shopping has affected modern people’s life to a great extent. Some say it is beneficial for many people, however, I believe the impacts of online shopping made society and personal life worse due to its excessive simplicity and unreliability, which I’m going to cover in this following essay.
First of all, after the scientific revolution, humanity’s tendency to simplify things has increased so much that it yielded too many bad effects on people’s daily life. For instance, when we needed to eat something, we used to go outside and gather food instead of booking food from online services, which is making us lazier than ever. Thus, due to the lack of proper movement, we are getting fat, which is leading to obesity - one of the fatal diseases that people are suffering from. All the things that we needed and wanted to buy were only acquired from the shops and places outside but, nowadays, just by browsing our phone, we are ordering whatever we want from the internet and it will be delivered right outside of our home. Consequently, this too much simplicity has made us more inactive and we will tend to simplify other things more.
Secondly, because of the idea of online shopping, the scam and hack websites has been increasing and scamming people a lot. When we buy something from shops we see the seller face to face and there is hardly any chance to get scammed by them. However, we can’t be aware of the seller when we are buying from the internet, which is making things more complicated and increasing the odds of getting scammed. Furthermore, when it comes to clothes, which is the most common thing that people book, we have no idea of the quality and size of the products. Even online shopping has a returning feature, it is not convenient because it takes a long time to pay-back. Also, what if the product is not the same as it has been displayed on its picture. Hence, there are many trust issues when buying products that we can’t physically see.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that online shopping’s disadvantages outweigh the benefits of online shopping. Because becoming lazy and buying useless things are not the way we should live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02577319588 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76641085006 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54381443299 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0630689173 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.875 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265047233805 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973670719815 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13284396537 0.0737576698707 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256734656059 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.215308345531 0.0645574589148 334% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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