As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The way Human solve variety of problems in day to day life is strongly contingent upon the ability of human to think, to come up with a process or an algorithm to solve it , to think intellectually with different perspectives with different constraints in mind. Problem solving is not just dependent on Technology.The prompt that confers that the technology makes us languid in our thinking process is not validated.In my opinion, i strongly disagree with this claim and argue that technology rather helps us to focus on more complex problem which just cannot be resolved by a machine without the intervention of human mind for two reasons.
To begin, Any Technology that people use to solve problem is being created or designed by humans.When you think of something which will resolve a problem to a huge number of society world wide, then you are challenging your thinking process and come up with a creative solution.For instance, in current era Internet Of Thing is a disruptive technology which could solve wide variety of day to day problems. Consider a Problem "Fire alert System in Home" , now-a-days fire is a major cause of death which takes many lives inadvertently. So, the best solution for this is to detect Fire in a home using IOT Sensors such as Carbon Dioxide,Smog,Smoke e.t.c before it start sprawling. These sensors will help us to gather the data regarding the home condition which can be analyzed and then can be predicted whether there is a fire in home.So, for this a network of sensor is required , a machine learning algorithm is required which will predict the value such as Fire or no fire, if there is a ire then an alert message will be sent to the home members regarding the this threat, so that some major preventive measures can be taken.Here, we are solving a real time problem, we are getting the real time data from the sensors, after getting the data we are analyzing it creating an algorithm in which the machine can predict the incoming data from the sensors. Though it is automated, the algorithm is created by us, the people. Human use their intellectual and analytical capability to come up with some eccentric solution which no one could ever thought of. So, even now can i say that it deteriorate the Human thinking? i don't think so.It is absurd to think that Technology hinders our thinking process , rather it helps us to think outside of the box and come up with some lucrative solution that will benefit huge number of people world wide.
Further, even if we assume that reliance on technology deteriorates our thinking process, one should not think that we are the one who created those technologies. For example, in the 1950s to 2000s there was no term Machine Learning, even though it was there , intensive research was going on as to how it can solve problem.Scientists after an intensive research produced some algorithms that helped in using the term machine learning techniques in our day to day life. I agree that the Machine Learning is a technology using which we solve variety problem in current era as it is an era of machines and automation , but can someone think who create d this Machine Learning? who created this Artificial Intelligence? we are the one who created this with intensive research ad study , after a huge experiments challenging our thinking capacity , we now designed machines which can come up with the ability of human thinking not completely but to certain extent.Using these machines we can put our focus on more day to day complex problems that possesses security Threat. Using Technology people come up with more innovative idea or technical idea to solve a particular problem. Now-a-days the term "Cryprography" is ruling the market as security is a major problem in this hustling life.People should come up with different solution using existing technology to create solutions for more complex problems.
Of course, some argue that increasing Technological solution makes our intellectual thinking process stagnant as people are becoming more and more lazier using those technology.However, there are some bunch of people who just carves out some flabbergasting solutions to a problem with their unique way which no one could think of.Does that mean the Technology deteriorate our thinking process? Even if it does, it depends upon us as to how to respond to an empty mind. Wide umber of problems prevails in the world and there are variety of technology. We are the one who is responsible to eradicate the problem by any means. We can come up with certain algorithm which can solve a small problem. We should not look at a problem as a large scale or a small scale. It is the duty of the people to protect and safeguard everyone and to eradicate every type of problem no matter as to what technology you use.People only use those technology to their benefit and ignore the potential problems are the ones whose thinking process is going to deteriorate.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 41.0 19.5258426966 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 35.0 11.3162921348 309% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 79.0 33.0505617978 239% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 113.0 58.6224719101 193% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4141.0 2235.4752809 185% => OK
No of words: 840.0 442.535393258 190% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92976190476 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.38356327096 4.55969084622 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92866770921 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 311.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.370238095238 0.4932671777 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1327.5 704.065955056 189% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.42095481 60.3974514979 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.541666667 118.986275619 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 23.4991977007 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 7.80617977528 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248522856494 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773991624047 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653046266375 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176595751711 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229765677057 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.1743820225 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 163.0 100.480337079 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.