Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement? It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading the book than doing physical exercises.
For many years, research has shown that doing exercises helps to improve a number of health complications, leading to a healthy body, brain and soul. However, some people use all excuses to avoid exercises. If i were forced to choose, i would definitely doing physical exercises rather than watching a movie.
To begin with, doing exercises offers many benefits to one's physiological health. Instead of sitting on the sofa and seeing the screen where energy expenditure is low, having activities outside the playground or park facilitates their blood flow and makes them stronger . Thus, the diseases and viruses can not attack them. For example, my brother , as a soccer player, preparing soccer and training very hard every day. he seldom get sick because of his great body. Without sickness, he can able to participate in anythings he likes. also, he has more opportunity to overcome the difficulties of match because he needs more energy to standstill his metal power and physical strength.
Secondly, some forms of exercises encourage socialization and teamwork with partner, which is a much better way to relax than being alone. For instance, a number of exercises needs a lot of people to involve in the game. In these sports, people meet together and play with each other, share their skills and happyness with each other. As a result, to achieve higher level of enjoyment and satisfaction. after the game, they become friends. In contrast, reading books and watching movies is often solitary experience, involving less interaction with friends and parents, which have negative effect to yourself.
In light of reasons mentioned above, I strongly believe that doing exercises is much more beneficial than seeing screen or reading a book. Our body require regular exercises to remain active and healthy. A fit person is more productive in the workplace. he is able to accomplish the task made by company and also be more relax after work because he is more comfortable dealing with the place of work.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Competition between friends usually negatively impacts friendships. 70
- Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement? It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading the book than doing physical exercises. 73
- In light of reasons mention above, I would deny the situation to face with my friends and classmate because i do not wants to lose my friend again and again. Therefore, I would highly recommend try to stay away from competition with friends. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Competition between friends usually negatively impacts friendships 85
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 330.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68669802484 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 145.348785872 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3311151418 49.2860985944 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165868471292 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421404743518 0.0996497079465 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623202473267 0.0662205650399 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102356241172 0.162205337803 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504215059618 0.0443174109184 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 63.6247240618 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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