Dear sir or madam
I am patron of your shop. I had purchased a laptop of Dell company before two months with reciept no.cz-23456. I am waiting this letter to you regarding a problem with the laptop which I have been facing since 2 days.
Let me explain, I was working on my laptop Saturday day night at that time suddenly screen was flickering for five minutes and then turn black. Afterthat I tried a lot from my self but it didn't turned on. As you know I am a freelancer, i have lots of pending work. I do all my work on it and all my data is stored in it therefore my work is disturbed. If I do not finish my work at time, it is big loss to my company as well as me. Also it vanished my image in front of my boss and seniors even till now I had done work Sincerely and regularly.
Since I have two years warranty I want to fix the problem as soon as possible within three days.
You may repair or replace it with new.
I am looking forward for your immediate response.
Your Sincerely
Manish Sachani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...n of your shop. I had purchased a laptop of Dell company before two months with r...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...re two months with reciept no.cz-23456. I am waiting this letter to you regardin...
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...s with reciept no.cz-23456. I am waiting this letter to you regarding a problem ...
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... this letter to you regarding a problem with the laptop which I have been facin...
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...you regarding a problem with the laptop which I have been facing since 2 days. ...
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...ith the laptop which I have been facing since 2 days. Let me explain, I was ...
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...facing since 2 days. Let me explain, I was working on my laptop Saturday day...
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... days. Let me explain, I was working on my laptop Saturday day night at that ...
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...y day night at that time suddenly screen was flickering for five minutes and then...
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...rthat I tried a lot from my self but it didnt turned on. As you know I am a freelanc...
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... I tried a lot from my self but it didnt turned on. As you know I am a freelancer...
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...bed. If I do not finish my work at time, it is big loss to my company as well as...
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...k at time, it is big loss to my company as well as me. Also it vanished my image...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
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... big loss to my company as well as me. Also it vanished my image in front of my bos...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d done work Sincerely and regularly. Since I have two years warranty I want to fix...
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...years warranty I want to fix the problem as soon as possible within three days....
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...ranty I want to fix the problem as soon as possible within three days. You may...
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...to fix the problem as soon as possible within three days. You may repair or re...
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...n three days. You may repair or replace it with new. I am looking forward fo...
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...ce it with new. I am looking forward for your immediate response. Your Si...
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...t with new. I am looking forward for your immediate response. Your Sincere...
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...ur immediate response. Your Sincerely Manish Sachani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15656565657 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36638125173 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2192929816 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.3076923077 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 4.34317383033 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 2.54639175258 864% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248010229448 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900498632087 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605283632573 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130559061397 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066317259764 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.