Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
When you want to select a place for living you will face many choices and options. Some people prefer to live in a big city and others maybe have a different opinion. According to my experience, living in a metropolis brings many advantages for you including more facilities, high exciting and being more sociable.
following I try to explain why I take this decision.
First of all, you could more enjoy your life by living in a big city. Imagine you are waking up in the morning while you are in London. you wear your clothes and depart home for your office. Every time you can select a different path.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Following
...iting and being more sociable. following I try to explain why I take this decisi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...in the morning while you are in London. you wear your clothes and depart home for y...
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Line 9, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r your office. Every time you can select a different path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 52.1666666667 23% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 505.0 1977.66487455 26% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 110.0 407.700716846 27% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59090909091 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.23853184046 4.48103885553 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3959504403 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 212.727598566 35% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.524837075471 128% => OK
syllable_count: 165.6 618.680645161 27% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3356226242 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.125 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161013239103 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697048960494 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381748969237 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880852379886 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663297617866 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 86.8835125448 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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