The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-minute information on a the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown
The figure illustrates how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology gathers up-to-the minute information on the climate in order to manufacture truthful forecasts. Overall, there are eight steps, beginning with the incoming information from satellite and ending with broadcast.
As you can observe from the first step,in order to get data to be analysed and forecasted,the information have to be gathered exactly on every single minute about the climate.Which comes from a satellite, radar and drifting buoy. Then, all the data that have been gathers are sent to headquarter as satellite photos, radar screens, synoptic charts where it going to be analysed. After this, the most reliable information that have been manufactured, will be prepared to forecasted. Eventually, the information will come to entire Australian's spectators via television's news, radio and recorded announcement from telephone.
- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-minute information on a the weather in order to produce reliable forecastsWrite a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown 50
- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-minute information on a the weather in order to produce reliable forecastsWrite a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Which
...n every single minute about the climate.Which comes from a satellite, radar and drift...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76119402985 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13675279368 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679104477612 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9989837272 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192279106359 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103942149617 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971494010653 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17624333423 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727097763069 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 61.2550243902 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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