Cultures and traditions change from generation to generation. Why does this happen? What can be done to change it?
It is argued that cultures and traditions have been changing with every generation. This is happening because of people moving to nuclear families from joint families and to change this trend the government can conduct seminars or campaigns to educate people about the benefits of living in joint families.
The main reason for this trend is that people these days do not want to live in joint families with old people rather they live alone. In other words, grandparents are the ones who can pass the traditional and cultural values to their grandchildren because the current generation might not know what their family beliefs and values are. Therefore, children do not get the opportunity to learn traditions and cultures from their grandparents. For example, according to a study in the year 2016 by the Guardian, there is a 30% increase in people living in nuclear families in India in the last 10 years.
The most viable solution to this problem is that the government should arrange campaigns or seminars to highlight the advantages of living in joint families.
That is to say that the government can encourage people through public awareness campaigns at workplaces. As a result, grandparents can pass the traditional values of the family to their grandchildren. To cite an example, a similar initiative taken by some states in India such as Punjab and this resulted in a 20 % increase in children who have more knowledge about their traditions and cultures.
In conclusion, cultures and traditions are changing with new generations. This is happening because of people living in nuclear families rather than in joint families with their elders and this can be changed through seminars about the merits of living in joint families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16433566434 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77884995381 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468531468531 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5985970904 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.083333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263106340276 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112632638274 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825925639597 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161082272621 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099983679443 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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