people can live and work anywhere they want to choose. because of improved communication, technology and transport. do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, people have the freedom to decide their perfect place to reside and where is their dream job. I support the idea that the positive impacts are greater than the negative effects.
The impact has not all been positive, advanced communication, technology and transport sometimes are not that convenient considering there are times a person urgently had to meet another face-to-face in order to deliver something appropriately to prevent possible problem. For example, I am working as an Interior Designer. I really need to meet my clients or vendor a in-person since it is more proper, clear information between us and less possible mistake will happen.
On the other hand, there are several obvious benefits, such as there will be less time needed as they develop all three essentials. Even the minority of times that is saved would give the user more opportunity to do something else. I could explain myself enjoying the benefits from all three developed essentials. Communication made easy since many phone application are made, I don't have to use cellular number to call, WhatsApp or Line will do that free of charge. For technology, now we have the Video Call feature, I often used it to call my workers just to check their work. In transport, Mass Rapid Transit made a significant change to my daily life as I don't have to drive for hours just to be present at the office.
Speaking of opportunity, while all these vital objects evolving, at the same time, our chance to do something new, chance to be better, or maybe to explore more of things we heave already know grew simultaneously. Google Translate helped me to learn other language aside of my native. E-Examiner from Testbig.com help me to elevate my writing skill. Online transportation help all the users to ease their life.
in conclusion, i believe the growth of communication, technology, and transport create an elevated positive impact than the negative effect as it helps in reducing time consumed and open wide more chance to exceed everything aside from its inconvenient at times.
- the crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. why is this happening? what can be done to reduce it? 67
- people can live and work anywhere they want to choose. because of improved communication, technology and transport. do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- people can live and work anywhere they want to choose. because of improved communication, technology and transport. do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantage? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eally need to meet my clients or vendor a in-person since it is more proper, clea...
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Line 9, column 380, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ince many phone application are made, I dont have to use cellular number to call, Wh...
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Line 9, column 662, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ignificant change to my daily life as I dont have to drive for hours just to be pres...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... all the users to ease their life. in conclusion, i believe the growth of com...
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Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to ease their life. in conclusion, i believe the growth of communication, te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, while, for example, in conclusion, speaking of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0347826087 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81279818835 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614492753623 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.712887623 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957748189036 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293656968712 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210127097248 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047489725412 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019756743981 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.