Some people today believe that the world's population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that the world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world's economy and society
Some people say that the increasing population in most countries nowadays is inconstant, which contributes to a global crisis. Others, however, think that this trend plays an integral role in boosting the prosperity to some nations. In my opinion, while this trend is perhaps beneficial to prevent labour-related problems from happening in the first place, the consequences could be more detrimental.
In terms of economic growth, a growing population can be beneficial in some countries because they are less likely to encounter labour-related issues. These issues including the shortage of labour workforce and the expenditure of overseas recruitment could negatively affect the economy. However, the absence of these difficulties could be favourable in saving governmental budget because not only does a crowded population facilitate internal labour sources but it also a decent source of external recruitment towards foreign countries.
Apart from the benefit of the increasing population expressed above, I believe that this trend can be even more damaging because of the effect of lacking basic resources. People, living in undeveloped countries, often live under difficult circumstances such as poverty, food scarcity, and the shortage of accommodation. This poses a problem to people’s lives as they experience a substandard living. Thus, if the population keeps increasing in the long term, the consequences would be more devastating. For example, immigrants, who settle down in African countries, are likely to live in slums, which adversely affects their living standard, as the result of lacking residential areas.
In conclusion, the world’s population is increasingly evident. Although this benefits the prosperity to some countries due to the sufficiency of the labour workforce, the consequences including the shortage of basic requirements among people such as accommodation can be more damaging.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80350877193 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23510674729 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3161601907 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.230769231 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172708966783 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712956244773 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773693763333 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109980579061 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360308756976 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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