Increasing the age limit for new drivers will help in achieving better road safety. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent times we have been giving more importance to safe commute to prevent accidents. The argument goes that in order to accomplish it the qualifying age for new drivers should be increased. This essay will highlight highlight that increased age limit will reduce mis-happenings.
To commence with, majority accidents are caused by reckless driving of young novice drivers, who drive vehicles in overspeed or do not wear seatbelts. This is because they are not mature enough to drive cautiously or do not understand that their actions can result into serious problems consequently. If people are allowed to drive at an increased age then they will become grown-ups and drive responsibly thus leading to less tragic accidents. For instance, a 22 years old working professional in comparison to a young college student ,who is 18 years old, is less likely to get into road accident while driving and follow traffic rules.
Furthermore, parents, business people and working professionals check cars for any faults before they start driving and install air-bags for emergency situations. In contrast, new teenage drivers do not want to spend their time in performing these checks, resulting in break-down or terrible accidents due to missing air-bags. Also, when people grow-up and start earning money they can spend more on getting safety measures installed in their vehicles.
In conclusion, increasing age limit for driving will certainly help in increasing road safety and make road transport to be much more safer option as new drivers will drive safely and take necessary actions to cut impact of adverse situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: highlight
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33590733591 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76155450263 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633204633205 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.805920578 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.636363636 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252640232459 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933020208938 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932952859046 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175923846522 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993122637255 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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