Should private schools receive government funding ?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Government funding has been at the heart of education industry’s finances since the inception of modern university structures. While, government institutes are managed by the government themselves and thus eligible to run fully on tax money, private institutions on the other hand are funded solely by the student fees collections and the promoter’s financial interests. In my opinion, private institutions play a vital role in the education infrastructure and therefore, should also be eligible to receive government funding.
Firstly, governmental regulators mandate a number of social responsibilities onto the private players which are financially non-viable for them and thus, need to be supported by the government. Moreover, in remote or underdeveloped areas, Private institutions often encounter financial gaps with respect to public counterparts which needs to be filled with government aid so as to keep the overall infrastructure from collapsing.
Secondly, governments need to fund research in areas which otherwise wouldn’t have been funded by the institute promoters due to their low short term financial feasibility. These areas are of little interest to the industry because of its long term and disruptive nature. For example, Research in areas like humanities or nascent new age technologies wouldn’t get financed because private organizations would fail find sufficient sponsors in these offbeat fields.
In conclusion, Given the utmost importance of education in shaping future of our society, Governments needs to play a leading role in supporting private schools with delivery of their social and moral obligations. In addition to this, government funding is also critical to the development of new age technologies and social research. Therefore, It is crucial to have an excellent coordination between public and private institutions, complemented by government aids, for our education system to flourish and outperform its predecessors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... needs to be filled with government aid so as to keep the overall infrastructure from co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89655172414 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40994035466 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589655172414 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7194101319 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.454545455 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.9090909091 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165730666505 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659612653579 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028276249652 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100462914157 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299423089906 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.24 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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