Dear HR,
This letter in response to the job offered in your esteemed organisation. Extremely, grateful for the opportunity to work in your prestigious institution. Regrettably, unable to accept the offer.
To pursue my passion for dancing applied as a dance instructor luckily hired last week. In addition to this, it was always my dream to be a popular actor since school days unluckily failure. However, joined dance group in one of the famous centres in town. Besides, my schedule is tight and enjoying teaching youngsters about dancing.
Honestly, it took a week to decide whether to grab a chance to weigh in my option because aware of your organisation for decades and the victorious accomplishments. Hopefully, the opportunity to work with your organisation would be given shortly and to be apart of your success.
Expectedly, looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you once again.
Yours Sincerely,
John Moses
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 257, Rule ID: APART_A_PART[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a part of' or 'apart from'?
Suggestion: a part of; apart from
...sation would be given shortly and to be apart of your success. Expectedly, looking fo...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, honestly, however, look, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97751574303 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1932222027 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13525056336 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552215209298 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699649387252 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102555086416 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795413744388 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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