The table depicts the information the sales of coffee and bananas of fairtrade-labelled in 2 different years which are 1992 and 2004 in UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden
It can be observed, there is an increment in the sale of coffee in year 2004 as compared to 1999 in all 5 countries whereas sale of bananas has already increased except Denmark.
The use of coffee is highest in UK and large difference is observed in sale of both the years, 1.5 millions of euros coffee is sold in UK whereas in 2004, it increased to 20 million of euros. Sweden has the least coffee purchase in 1999 as well as in 2004.
The purchase of coffee is highest in UK and sale increased more than 3 times in year 2004 as compared to 1999. Denmark is the country with least sale in 2004, which is 0.9 million of euros only, which is less than half of the sale made in year 1999.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...m and Sweden It can be observed that their is an increment in the sale of coffee i...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...s observed in sale of both the years, 1.5 millions of euros coffee is sold in UK whereas in 2...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the least'.
Suggestion: with the least
...ompared to 1999. Denmark is the country with least sale in 2004, that is 0.9 million of eu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37195121951 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53073757216 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481707317073 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.243177235 43.030603864 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.4 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329203007591 0.215688989381 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193206805503 0.103423049105 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835430905757 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228837134497 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527032212674 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.66 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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