Essay topic 24: The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Advent of technology has provided people with numerous facilities which have made the contemporary life very luxurious and comfortable so that people are highly attached to them even for simple tasks of daily life. I concede with the assertion that modern life has turned people to dependent individuals and prevented them from being their real independent ones.
First, development of technology has made the contemporary life much easier. Invention of electronic devices such as automobiles and remote controls has turned people into dependent lax individuals. People use automobiles to travel long distances in a short time with less energy. Developing technology also provided various types of conserved foods later that have lost their original nutrition affecting their health in long run. In addition, people used to have organic foods and get their food supplies in person whereas contemporary people shop all their needs online. Besides, as population is growing, more food supplies must be furnished. Hence, the organic food cannot simply be accessible to everyone and people have to consume the chemical grown foods and fruits.
In addition, development of various utilities could indicate mental state of addition. Some people go to extremes and tend to have luxury facilities to emulate with others and in some cases they find relief in shopping. For instance, if any new products like automobiles, smart phones, etc. are presented to the market, they are willing to have them. These people are psychologically addicted to the latest trends of new products and if they do not reach them, they suffer from depression and lack of self confidence.
However, we cannot neglect the fact that the comfort and advance of contemporary life has provided fruitful opportunities for people in different areas like communicating, working and shopping online. People can communicate easily throughout the world and work for organizations in long distances without taking the burden of spending long hours commuting to workplaces. Also, online shopping has made it possible to use time efficiently for people with tight schedule to save their time. The advancement of technology has helped humans make their dream and plans implemented like constructing magnificent skyscrapers with comfortable facilities and high tech cars.
In conclusion, technology impedes people to be independent individuals and it threatens their physical and mental health in some cases like overusing automobiles and consuming conserved foods and finding relief in shopping unnecessary goods. Yet, technology makes life much easier like communicating, working and shopping online to realize their dreams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the chemical grown foods and fruits. In addition, development of various util...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, however, if, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2289.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58292682927 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87981033317 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541463414634 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8947642544 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.45 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153252081624 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049974414599 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045745141435 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954311606352 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633532189656 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 12.1743820225 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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