Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
young people do not spend time to help society
The youth is the backbone of any society. Even though some people may agree that young people do not try to help their society, I totally agree that they do their duties toward their society. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoints based on two main reasons.
First of all, young people are the main source of creativity in society. in other words, they did run their minds’ ideas off, so they still have creative solutions for every issue we have in our society. When their ideas are considered, issues end easily and effectively. For instance, last year, the statistics showed that the number of trains’ accidents increased by a high rate, so the government suggested listening for various ideas from various ages. Finally, it found an effective idea that was out of the box and was easy to be achieved with a low budget to stop this rate of kills. In fact, the idea was generated by a young man who tried to benefit his society. if he had never brought this idea, the problem of the trains would have never been solved until now.
secondly, the youth is very energetic and careful. they care about their society's problems than older people. In other words, they move and take a step positively to find a solution to a specific problem. For instance, last month, there was a poor homeless in my street, and he needed to be in a small house and a meal to feed himself. Therefore, the youth of my street took a positive step and announced that they were collecting money for the sake of that man. Indeed, they collected more than they needed and they provided an appropriate place for the man to live and a job to afford for his life. if the youth had not taken that step, the man would have never found a comfortable life.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I highly believe that young people try to benefit society with their available time. And we have to consider their efforts towards society as they help it to be better place through creating new ideas and being more careful about social problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in fact, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64931506849 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4481471887 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545205479452 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3383645467 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3157894737 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128992962973 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384250385269 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725035866864 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105006886253 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832116781088 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.