In the present era, grown-up persons are shying away from physical activity. Some of the individuals believe in the idea of motivation for fitness is through global scale athletic events like cricket championship and tennis competition like Wimbledon. However, on the contrary view, few of the population are convinced by the fact that there are numerous other options that are present for the mature to inspire themselves for a better health condition.
One of the key element in boosting athleticism in any of the developed age humans can be persuasion through an international level of competition. The peers who usually supports this view see it as an opportunity to copy and learn from the athletes and also if the squad is of the home side that can have a very positive impact on the whole community. Take an example of France football team, they have won the recently concluded soccer world cup held in Russia that had a significant effect overall on the people of their country. Individuals started following the way the team used to be trained and inspired specifically the mature generation.
The opposite outlook towards a healthy regimen is to find better paths to attract the grown-ups towards a robust manner of living instead of getting inclined towards a worldwide event. They can motivate themselves through constant update about their body condition, for example, keeping track of their body weight, fat percentage, and muscles.If anything is in alarming state than it will be the time to alter their habits and mannerism towards physical fitness
As per personal viewpoint instead of finding enthusiasm through contest and competitions an individual should always look upon themselves and should indulge himself in any one form of workout be it jogging, running, swimming or any kind of physical activity it will result in the overall development of a person.
In conclusion I would mention that global events do play a vital role to attract humankind for a healthy mannerism of life but it is not enough. An individual will need more than that and self-belief and self inclination towrads a better path to a good healthy life and it makes much more sense.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the contrary, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07756232687 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75394467876 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590027700831 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.922221564 49.4020404114 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.636363636 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8181818182 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963821678766 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360580964546 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261872060109 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0450743646642 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289888948533 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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