the chart below gives information about three different crimes in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph demonstrate the number of three specific categories of crimes, namely car theft, house burglar and street robbery in the span of 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Obviously, there are more car thefts happened than the other two categories.
The year 1970 witnessed a total of 18000 car thefts in the two regions, followed a gradual yet steady increase in the next 20 years when it reached 25000 car thefts in 1990. From 1990 on wards, the number soared through the next five years, peaking at 33000 crimes in 1995. After that it dropped sharply, ending at 27000 car theft related ...
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 186 200
No. of Characters: 895 1000
No. of Different Words: 108 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.693 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.812 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.301 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 62 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 39 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.718 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.222 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.425 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.611 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.095 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4