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The reading claims that the disappearance of Roanoke settlers is no longer a mystery but instead they relocated to the Island of Croatoa and provides three reasons of support. while, the professor states that it is still a mystery and the points that are made in the article are week and easily dismissed; she refutes each of the author's reasons.
To begin with, the article avers that the governor found the word Croatoa carved onto a piece of wood that asserts that the settlers relocate to Croatoa. In contrast, the lecturer opposes this point by stating that this point is not make sense for relocation. She explains that before governor left, he told them to relocate toward internal of the colony if they have any trouble. However, Croatoa locate in the opposit side and the settlers will not go there since it had less advantages.
Second, the article posits that English articraft have been found on Croatoa supporting the idea of relocation. On the other hand, the professor contends this point by saying that there is no way of proof. In fact, she says that the ring that mentions in the passage is came to the Croatoa by trade because they tried to trade their belongs for food in harsh condition. This challenges the information made in the passage.
Third, the reading asserts that they did find that the indigenous inhabitants possessed European characteristics. Conversely, the lecturer casts doubt on this point by explaining that this point is not true and the characteristics came from English but not from settlers and this point does not explaind the disappearance. Actually, the search parties arrived to the Croatoa after 100 years from disappearance and these English characteristics might came from any group that settled in Croatoa and not from Roanoke. This disputes the third point of the author.
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by stating that this point is not make sense
by stating that this point does not make sense
Croatoa locate in the opposit side
Croatoa was located in the opposite side
the ring that mentions in the passage is came to the Croatoa by trade
the ring that mentions in the passage came to the Croatoa by trade
and these English characteristics might came from any group
and these English characteristics might come from any group
Sentence: However, Croatoa locate in the opposit side and the settlers will not go there since it had less advantages.
Error: opposit Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Second, the article posits that English articraft have been found on Croatoa supporting the idea of relocation.
Error: articraft Suggestion: art craft
Sentence: Conversely, the lecturer casts doubt on this point by explaining that this point is not true and the characteristics came from English but not from settlers and this point does not explaind the disappearance.
Error: explaind Suggestion: explain
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No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
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No. of Different Words: 156 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.182 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.869 4.6
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Sentence Length SD: 13.113 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.555 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
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