In the modern era, being independent is regarded as a crucial factor contributing to the thriving of people in their social and individual lives. One of the heated debates in this realm is associated with the comparison between the pivotal influence of parents in adolescents' lives then and now. Some people adhere to the view that nowadays, adults are more dependent on their parents than in the past, while others believe that they can make their own decisions without the support of their parents now. I firmly agree with the latter group. In what follows, I will cogently pinpoint my most conspicuous reasons to justify my point of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that parents are not the most intimate people for teenagers anymore. In ancient times, teenagers spent a lot of time with their parents and considered them as the most influential parts of their lives. However, today's youngsters tend to spend more time with their close friends which make them get further from their parents, so they think they can handle their problems with the help of friends or on their own. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About four years ago, although all of the hardships, I decided to move to another city to attend university. Because I did not spend much time with my mother before, I knew I could deal with my problems without any proponent. While I knew my father chose to be near his family when he wanted to pick his university.
Another equally significant point to be mentioned is that by the development of the Internet, people seek the solution for their difficulties in the search bar of web browsers. Decades ago, adults trusted their parents' experiences to come up with proper solutions to their strains. However, people have access to a plethora of information and resources through the Internet, which brings them more independence. For instance, when I wanted to select a field to continue my study at the university, I did not ask for my parents' assistance. Instead, I looked up the potential majors that covered my interests with good markets in the future. As a result, I opted for Computer Engineering despite my parents' disapproval. Gradually, they have become acquainted with the advantages of my notable and abundant job potentials in the future, so they are happy with my decision.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that people are becoming less dependent on their families. This is because parents are not the most important and influential people in our lives, plus we can solve our principal dilemmas using the Internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...of this. About four years ago, although all of the hardships, I decided to move to another...
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Line 3, column 741, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...with my problems without any proponent. While I knew my father chose to be near his f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, then, while, for instance, in brief, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96832579186 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73167536991 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527149321267 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2807804929 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0476190476 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299068957718 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841812933479 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689743204734 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189655923514 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558836453712 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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