The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie chart illustrates the information regarding how much energy consumed by household in Australia.therefore, some occupants used electricity according to the table.
Overall, the electricity used in typical Australian home mandatory categories of usage is heating and cooling because in Australia weather changes get horrible sometimes that is why Australian's use too much energy to use cooling and heating appliances.
Having a quick glance it is apparent that the highly used appliances for heating and cooling it accounts for 38% of electricity, therefore, a slightly down the proportion of water heating products a quarter consumption of energy. Looking at the similar, lighting, and refrigerators are at the same 7 %.
Moving towards the rest of the information in middle, other appliances takes 16% of energy in the source of electricity stand by power had the lowest proportion of number rather than other energy holders cooking also had only 1% above the stand by power consumptions. One people in the Australian house use 5,000-65,000 kW electricity and if they are two people than it consume 6,000-8,000 kW of electricity
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- Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world, unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.To what extent do you agree or disagree ? 78
- The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make com 84
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australia men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australia men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48044692737 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26849438665 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0018382104 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.5 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23232374236 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104576274112 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836568439399 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144084885172 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781834230259 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.2329268293 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.