The overuse of natural resources causes an ultimate exhaust of them. People have been using them to be in the swim of new styles such as making new furniture of recent design. This causes a huge harm to the environment. Therefore, the government should discourage people the overuse of these resources.
To what extent do you support or oppose the idea?
As per my point of view, It would appeal me great if I could support to the Government actions on people towards the overuse of natural resources. and making them to get exhausted. Recently this has been a global issue. I believe humankinds are complete responsible for this issue since they always attempt to adopt the new styles using the nature supplies. In addition, it is also affecting our environment, which tends to impact on all people health and leads to our world in danger situation.
I would like to explain this problem on our nature by providing some examples. There is a nearby village at my town and it is surrounded with fullest forest. There were a noticeable scenario's, where people are busy in utilizing trees by cutting them in the leverage, which can be later used to make some awesome furniture's and house decorative things. Further, I have had a chance to verify report about the forest with one of my nearest person who is working in a forest department and as a result it was really not in good situation now. Nevertheless it is amazing forest. On the other hand public is playing an imperative role in demolished the nature beauty. The circumstances were made me so sluggish, as which in turn trouble to animals too.
Consequently, so far although the situation is curbed, the amount of resources used per month is significantly growing high. Eventually, this will directly leads the mental and physical health crisis on humans. Therefore, It would be great if it could be limited by the government by passing some deactivation's towards the society about the environmental conditions. And the law should be rigour.
Sometimes, I even think this enormous harm could trends to loss of life's on earth. As we all know this is also impacting on the life living in forest. Moreover, I agree that resources are meant to be to taken leverage of it. However, anything reaches to extremes are commenced to creating negative things around the lives. Likewise, to fulfil the need of humans also necessary part of life. For an instance, I had been to one more place it is named as safari with fullest forest and animals, there were not much animals left due to the global warming.
In conclusion, I can say there are major in cons effects on the nature rather than any positives. So, therefore, rules and regulations needs to be stringently declared on part of utilizing the resources at their own interest should be cut down. On other side all people should follow it and keep it as an essential part of life to survive a healthy life along with good care of nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...wards the overuse of natural resources. and making them to get exhausted. Recently ...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the fullest'.
Suggestion: with the fullest
...village at my town and it is surrounded with fullest forest. There were a noticeable scenari...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'scenario'?
Suggestion: scenario
...fullest forest. There were a noticeable scenarios, where people are busy in utilizing tre...
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Line 5, column 541, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...t was really not in good situation now. Nevertheless it is amazing forest. On the other hand...
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Line 9, column 390, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...ental conditions. And the law should be rigour. Sometimes, I even think this enor...
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Line 13, column 50, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'trend'
Suggestion: trend
..., I even think this enormous harm could trends to loss of lifes on earth. As we all kn...
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Line 13, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...could trends to loss of lifes on earth. As we all know this is also impacting on t...
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Line 13, column 460, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the fullest'.
Suggestion: with the fullest
...to one more place it is named as safari with fullest forest and animals, there were not much...
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Line 13, column 508, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...lest forest and animals, there were not much animals left due to the global warming....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 451.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78492239468 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68164378989 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552106430155 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6773435405 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.32 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.04 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249182830404 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058096820868 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470179799702 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128819146452 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533730381298 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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