The world has stepped into the 21st century with lots of advancements in technology which allows the people to travel anywhere in the world within a short time to remote areas such as the South Pole. When these developments give advantages of less travel time and efforts, it becomes more expensive as well as it leads to many atmospheric contamination due to pollution. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of the development.
Nowadays, it became possible for tourists and scientists to travel anywhere in the world within a minimal time interval with less efforts. The technology has given an abundance of machines and facilities for the people to travel easily around the world including airplanes and metro railways. For instnce, today people can get the airplane tickets within a click of a button, which takes the people where ever they want to travel including the southpole. This is a major advantage, because in the ast people had taken nearly 10 to 15 days of travel ifthewaant to go some places far away from their villages, but today technological developments have helped people to travel anywhere with less effort and time consumption.
However, there are few disadvantages for these developments as it leads to lots of atmospheric contaminatons and economical stress to the people. Even there are althernative options such as rail roads and ships for the long distance travel, people prefer to choose airplane without considering the economics. Ultimately, air travel is more expensive than other passenger services, even it encourages many people to travel around the world. The other negative aspects behind the advanced developments, tourists from all oevr the world are easily attracted by many place, which can leads to pollution due to the increased waste material disposal and latters in the areas. Thus, these developments can cause some disadvantages to the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun place seems to be countable; consider using: 'many places'.
Suggestion: many places
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25649350649 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90355420181 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5658317414 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.916666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265793885889 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10122869306 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448725907863 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180824238615 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288906673864 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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