You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
• Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interests about study for a qualification at other country with a full-time course. However, by considering the place and time period, I would like to request you to confer me approval to take part in completing the study with sometimes off from work during the course.
Furthermore, duration to complete the course will be exactly 2 years. As well as, it is belonging to the sales and marketing product subjects, which is moreover, related to the work in our organization. Therefore, the benefits and significant rate will be in incline level by providing an essential skills to the company. It would be a sensational moment if you could grant me a permission. As per my point of view this extra experience can take me to play an imperative role in an Organization. So far, I have given my best to the company.
I have discussed about this with my team members and they are quiet good enough to handle by themselves with the absence of me. As per me they are capable to take up this challenge to support me over the course. Likewise, I will endeavor to be an active in Skype and emails. Also, I can assure to reply when there is chance for it, with expected delays. I hope this would not be affecting to any progress as well team merits and to my company at any point of view.
As you know, I have received recently a promotion for test lead position. Further, this course could be the opportunity to enhance my skills and grab more knowledge globally related to our company products. In addition, I will consider my role as a responsible person for maintaining team collaboration towards the productive work to the industry's growth and positives. Eventually, this leads to the success to both company and to my career. Please expedite the approval process and I appreciate in advance for the support.
I am looking forward to the positive reply.
Yours Sincerely,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my i...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rests about study for a qualification at other country with a full-time course. H...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[3]
Message: The verb belong is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'belongs'
Suggestion: belongs
...will be exactly 2 years. As well as, it is belonging to the sales and marketing product subj...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...will be exactly 2 years. As well as, it is belonging to the sales and marketing product subj...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'skill'?
Suggestion: skill
...incline level by providing an essential skills to the company. It would be a sensation...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any. It would be a sensational moment if you could grant me a permission. As per ...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nt if you could grant me a permission. As per my point of view this extra experie...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e by themselves with the absence of me. As per me they are capable to take up this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, likewise, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 26.3917525773 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 937.175257732 170% => OK
No of words: 339.0 206.0 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70796460177 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79143344188 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 127.690721649 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545722713864 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 290.88556701 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8113321959 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 7.41237113402 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200971235449 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556330767771 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657803561187 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105564357544 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100882847807 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 41.2886597938 206% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.