Parents play a plethora of roles in their childrens life, for instance, as mentors to guide them, as consulors to understand their feelings, and as friends to encourage during the hard times. Parents are as crucial as the basic necessities in life such as food, shelter, and water, etc. Hence, to be a good parent, one has to inculcate various values and ethics before to earn the same respect from children as they expect from them. Well, if you ask me what are the essential values for an ideal parent, I would say that they should be sympathetic or understanding, impart moral teachings at different stages of life, and guide them whenever they are in trouble. In the following essay I have explained various reasons to bolster my position.
Firstly, parents should understand the needs and requirements of a child by observing him/her closely and comprehending subtle changes in their attitude. Many times, orthodox parents tend to force their children to follow rituals and abide by traditional principles of wearing clothes, and carrying themselves in public. Parents with a conventional mindset expect thier children to abandon latest technology and forbid them from using internet, social media and interacting with friends on messenging application. Due to high pressure from parents, children are compelled to give up thier freedom, thereby inducing a feelings like depression at a very early stage of life.
Secondly, parents must impart moral and spiritual teachings to their children from the childhood itself. They must teach their offsprings how to behave in society, respect others, and help people who are in need. These lessons can not be found in mere textbooks or libraries. Therefore, the foremost important responsibility of the parents is to develop their children in a manner that they comprehend the naunces of social relationship and later on in life, contribute to the upliftment of the society.
Thirdly, they should guide their children in hard times. Many times, children get into bad habits, particularly, drugs, alcohol or roberies. It is at that time, parents should step in to save their child and show them the right way of living.
In conclusion, every parent should inculcate the qualities mentioned above - sympathetic, imparting moral values and helping their children to nurture their children and prepare them for the future.
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- Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it, or is it better to save for some time in the future? 76
- The extended family(grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. 76
- 46.What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 3
- In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...rd times. Parents are as crucial as the basic necessities in life such as food, shelter, and wate...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'abandon the latest'.
Suggestion: abandon the latest
...tional mindset expect thier children to abandon latest technology and forbid them from using i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24146981627 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77130191536 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569553805774 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0016042547 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.470588235 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4117647059 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0463232647931 0.236089414692 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0175440900848 0.076458572812 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0198927475914 0.0737576698707 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.02826661789 0.150856017488 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110996310716 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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