INDIVIDUALS CAN DO NOTHING TO IMPROVE THE ENVIRONMENT, ONLY GOVERNMENTS AND LARGE COMPANIES CAN MAKE A DIFFERENCE.
Every single person can do anything for their family but they cannot do for the improvement of environment. The only way to improve the nature i.e governments and bring companies can bring large difference by implementing new rules and with the help of new technology the change is possible.
Firstly, each person should consider that development in environment is their responsibility and the first basic improvement in environment is planting a tree. the person can take it as a challenge as plantation of trees. Atleast every individual can plant 100 trees in an area. for example, recently, i have heard about an old women who is living in delhi she planted 1000 tress in total area of delhi because she observed lot of changes like pollution in that area so for thinking of future generation she took it as a challenge and performed. she got compliments from president and all over the india.
Secondly, authorities and companies can change the entire world because the government can rule the world with entire powers.let us take example, by changing the people mindset companies sells their goods and products with high profit by giving publicity. so, companies and governments combinedly can bring celebrities like actors,cricketers etc and giving advertisements, motivational speeches which will inspire them and also celebrities should feel that as their own responsibility for changing environment and majorly, governments should provide specific funds to the people.
Finally, both individual and governments can make a large difference by thinking innovatively in order to motivate them and giving funds etc. according to me, governments and huge companies make a vast difference in environment compared to a single person who tries very hard to change the nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33568904594 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0739124998 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547703180212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.1154328131 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.272727273 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328821678732 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127054196152 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856922714278 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211903963151 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939823069505 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.