It is common aspiration among many young people to run their own business rather than work for an employer. Do you think the disadvantages of working for yourself outweigh the disadvantages ?
Nowadays, many young people are eager to launch their own business . However, people have diverse views about this issue, so question that if it is worth becoming a businessman at young ages generates heated debates in many countries between detractors and supporters of running a business. I would probably agree with the statement that the vulnerable youngsters should take a risk and embark on a business, and in this essay, I will support my idea by presenting some reasons.
First and foremost, running a business is very rewarding in terms of income. For instance , many people who were ...
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First and foremost, running a business is very rewarding in terms of income. For instance , many people who were businessmen after working for employers claim that they earn more than they did as an employee.
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