To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Society is rich with tradition characteristics. To dig out all, I think major cities is not feasible enough to list down all major attributes of society.
First, Major Cities has people with all over places, People have mixed up traditions. for example, Cities like Bangalore in India is full of people across all over the world. Everyone has their own way to follow tradition in terms of festivals or clothes. These mixed cultures create ambiguity about society.
Second, People in Rural areas try to save their culture. we can take Bishnoi village in Rajasthan in India for an instance. People in this village believe in making carpet by hand and try to save their culture or long-running tradition. While in major cities in Rajasthan like Jaipur, all things are used as machine-made. It loses its charm of uniqueness and authenticity, while in our areas, still, handwork has more priority instead of fast-paced and machine work.
Third, Rural areas people follow all traditions like marriages, traditional attire. In major cities try to cut down the marriage procedure and finish it within a day. However, In rural areas, the celebration goes on at least for a week. if one's study the major cities then he is unaware of the ancestral establishments.
Hence, Major cities fail to depict the accurate picture of society, Rural areas are best to get knowledge about conventional practices. Most preference should be given to villages instead of Major cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, still, then, third, while, at least, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.3162921348 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 241.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08713692946 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73646340226 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614107883817 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8819518686 60.3974514979 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.1176470588 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1764705882 23.4991977007 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147919672411 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472317145201 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593997290162 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917924244584 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495729621077 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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