The bar chart given compares the number of airline passengers of three different airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000.
Overall, the number passengers of these three airports witnessed an increase during the time given. Additionally, it can be seen that LaGuardia was the most popular choice among the travellers compared to the others.
At the beginning, LaGuardia showed its influence when it received the huge quantity of travellers, reaching roughly 35 million. Afterwards, it witnessed a gradual growth until 1999 to stand at 50 million, later the number of passengers sharply developed, reaching a high of nearly 70 million. It is noticeable that LaGuardia was the best airline according to the travellers' choices most of the time given except 1997 when John F. Kennedy's passengers obtained was highest. In terms of the number of travellers of John F. Kennedy, it began with the significant figure when it is reported there were approximately 28 millions of passengers visiting, after that the number experienced a significant growth until 1997 before some fluctuations to the end of the period to have around 43 million.
Regarding the business of Newark airport, it is observed to develop compared to the first year. Initially, there were a mere of 15 millions of travellers seen to visit the airport. Conversely, in the next following year, this number remarkably changed with a rise of nearly 40 million. Following which, there was no sign in the growth of travellers when the figure stayed static until the end of the time given. It is further observed that, although Newark got the lowest of passengers in comparison with the other ones, it showed the historic record when the number had the second highest position in 1999.
- The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s. 84
- The table below shows sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- the diagram below shows the process of milk production 78
- The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992 67
- The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 612, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '28 million'.
Suggestion: 28 million
...it is reported there were approximately 28 millions of passengers visiting, after that the num...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '15 million'.
Suggestion: 15 million
...t year. Initially, there were a mere of 15 millions of travellers seen to visit the airport. C...
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Line 7, column 536, Rule ID: HISTORIC_RECORD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'historical record'?
Suggestion: historical record
...ison with the other ones, it showed the historic record when the number had the second highest ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, if, regarding, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 965.302439024 152% => OK
No of words: 288.0 196.424390244 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08680555556 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76913368576 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517361111111 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1650719409 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.642857143 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208710139191 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805490116591 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100844448149 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177051943361 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137093162129 0.0819641961636 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.